The Toynbees
Father - Patrick, Major Character #3
Mother - Nancy, maiden name Blommer, secretary at the police station, has real connections in the city as opposed to her husband's imagined connections, as the story moves on it is revealed that she knows what's going on in the whole city, but she keeps a tight lip
Oldest son - Chad, Major Character #1
Oldest daughter - Monica, born 1967 (16 years old), sophomore at Tremper, smart and sassy, has a crush on Harrison Ford
Middle daughter - Stephanie, born 1970 (13 years old), 7th grader at Lincoln, moody, nicknamed The Grouch, slams doors
Youngest son - Philip, born 1973 (10 years old), 4th grader at Grewenow, active, perhaps ADHD, loves arcade games, especially Pacman
Youngest daughter - Julie, born 1976 (7 years old), 1st grader at Grewenow, cheery, watches too much TV, especially PBS, sings Sesame Street songs at the dinner table
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Wednesday, June 30, 2010
Thursday, March 5, 2009
Major Character #1
Family
- Father is major character #3, who he looks up to for advice, especially in future employment
- Born in 1965
- Mother and siblings to be determined
Friends
- Best friends with major character #2, who is one year older than him
- Likes to play simple card games with major character #2 to pass the time
- Friends with his neighbor and classmate, major character #4
- Friends with his father's coworker, who is huge Frank Zappa fan
Hobbies and Interests
- Loves Frank Zappa, especially music from the mid-seventies onwards. He shares this interest with his father, who prefers the earlier years. They often have friendly arguments over which era of Zappa is best. Major characters #1 and #2 often play card games with jazzy Zappa music in the background.
- Likes Pink Floyd as this is an influence from his father, who only likes Syd Barrett-era Floyd. He actually prefers Pink Floyd after Syd Barrett and loves Dark Side of the Moon and Wish You Were Here. He feels too intimidated to debate his father on this issue as his father is very sensitive about Syd Barrett. His father hates the song "Shine On You Crazy Diamond" whereas he likes it a lot.
- Is a fan of Monty Python's Flying Circus. His favorite movie of all time is Time Bandits. He believes Terry Gilliam will be the next greatest director like Spielberg.
- Unlike his father and his best friend, he doesn't have a car and is not a car enthusiast. He feels as if he should like cars, but is really indifferent to them.
Personality
- Because he hasn't put much time into self-reflection yet, he hasn't developed a strong sense of self. He just has a strong sense of cultural (movies and music) preferences.
- He is a bit shy and reclusive, but is a very loyal friend and son.
- He is a good friend because he's a great listener and finds his friends genuinely interesting.
- He's very interesting in learning more about people, but has a hard time approaching them.
Wednesday, March 4, 2009
Major Character #3
Family & Background
- Father of major character #1
- Born January 6, 1946, same day as his hero Syd Barrett
- Married at the early age of 18 (in 1964) to his high school sweetheart
- Other children to be determined
- Has a cat named Lucyfur Sam, named after the Pink Floyd song
Career
- Started officially working at American Motors in 1963 at the age of 17, although he helped out his father as "an apprentice" for 3 years before being officially hired by the company
- Because of this, he likes to tell people he's worked at AMC since Kennedy won the elections in 1960
- Likes to take credit for contributing to the design of the AMC Rambler Marlin, which he still drives. He often tells people he meets that he designed the car. To friends and relatives, he'll admit to contributing to the design. In reality, it was only a coincidence that the designer, Vincent Geraci, had similar ideas to him.
- He has a strong work ethic and a stronger loyalty to American Motors.
Hobbies
- Big fan of Syd Barrett as they share the same birthday. Only likes the Syd Barrett-era of Pink Floyd. Holds a grudge against Roger Waters. Likes to sing "Lucifer Sam" aloud to his cat.
- Also is a big fan early Frank Zappa and the Mothers of Invention. He shares this interest with his son, major character #1, and one of his coworkers who owns every album that Zappa ever released, including bootlegs. The Man from Utopia was just released during this screenplay.
- Thinks 1967 was the best year in music history.
- A Green Bay Packers fan. Although he didn't attend the first Superbowl, he did go the famous Ice Bowl of 1966. It was also his son's first Packers game. He took him there as a baby, which his wife strongly protested. "He will thank me for it later!" he replied.
- Also a collector of psychedelic art.
- Although it appears he may experiment with drugs, his only drug of choice is alcohol.
Personality & Relationships
- He suffers from a narcissistic personality disorder - mainly about his contributions to American Motors
- He expects his son, major character #1, to go along with his ideas and plans of following in his footsteps to work at AMC
- Relationship with his wife is to be determined
- He believes his son's friends look up to him
Major Character #4 - Kimberley Kozak
Background and Family
- Intends to enroll at Ripon College, accepted in the winter, would like to major in physics
- Partially modeled after the character Lindsay Weir from Freaks and Geeks
- From a working class family that lives in the Sunnyside neighborhood of Kenosha
- Father works at Kohl's (supermarket)
- Mother works in insurance
- Has a younger brother who is adopted from South Korea
- Her family hosts Masumi, an exchange student at Tremper, for one month
Relationship with Major Characters #1 and #2
- Has been neighbors with major character #1 since childhood
- Thinks major character #2 is too self-absorbed
- Thinks major character #1 has more potential than as an assembly line worker at AMC
- Thinks major character #2 is not realistic in his career dreams
- Always encourages major character #1 to find a better life
- Has no romantic interests in either characters
Motivation
- Wants to study science at Ripon College
- Postpones her social life at high school for one at college
- Has perhaps an unrealistic vision of life in college, such as being surrounded by deep-thinking open-minded scholars
- Wants to travel the world
Tuesday, March 3, 2009
Major Character #2 - Matthew Savaglio
Car Enthusiast
- Has no loyalty towards AMC cars.
- Drives a Datsun 280 ZX
- Wants to buy a 1984 Chevrolet Corvette
- Better at driving cars than repairing them (that's why he doesn't want to work at AMC)
New Wave Image
- Wears clothing similar to Gary Numan's Telekon suit
- Fan of British new wave synthpop artists like Gary Numan, John Foxx, and OMD
- Has dreams or fantasies about riding one of the lightcycles from the film TRON.
- Buys his first CD (Herbie Hancock's Future Shock) but doesn't have a CD player
Job/Hobby
- Works at The Spot drive-in as a temporary job
- Wanted to work at Andy's drive-in because they showcase vintage automobiles
- Longs for a career in driving
- Gets an opportunity to participate in a race at Wilmot Speedway in Kenosha County
- Also participates in demolition derbies
- Was disappointed by attending a monster truck rally in West Allis, WI
Relationships
- Best friends with major character #1, who is one year younger, they've been friends since Lincoln Junior High School
- Acquaintance of major character #4, thinks she is a meddler in #1's life, thinks #1 is wasting his time with her if they are not dating, thinks she is a little snobby
- I am still developing his relationships with others
Personality
- Somewhat reclusive
- Strong work ethic
- A little obsessive about his new wave image
- Nerdy sense of humor - jokes about Star Wars & Knight Rider
- Emotional personality still needs to be developed more so as not to become a two-dimensional comic book character
- I just did a web search for the name and found that there is a real Matthew Valeo from Kenosha.
- It's not too surprising, but I'm open to changing the family name if legal issues arise.
- I'd like to keep an Italian surname because I believe there can't be a screenplay about Kenosha without an Italian-American in a major role.
- I think the surname is suitable because an automotive website comes up first when I google "Valeo."
Monday, March 2, 2009
Minor Characters
Masumi, Japanese exchange student – only in Kenosha for a month, thinks major character #1 is nice but is not interested in him, thinks Kenosha is very boring, from the city of Kumagaya (compared to Kenosha in size by the US Department of Defense during WW2, plus I have spent plenty of time in both cities)
Tall guy - his height is overemphasized by his
Sting-like spiked hair, peculiar character who only says "So," "No," and "I don't know."
Major character #2's friend - also a coworker at AMC, apparently the biggest fan of Frank Zappa in Kenosha, has all of his albums including bootlegs, likes to hang out at Frank's Diner, possibly named Frank for the motif
Tall guy - his height is overemphasized by his

Major character #2's friend - also a coworker at AMC, apparently the biggest fan of Frank Zappa in Kenosha, has all of his albums including bootlegs, likes to hang out at Frank's Diner, possibly named Frank for the motif
Major Characters
#1 - a senior at Tremper, intends to work at AMC after graduating
#2 - friend of #1, graduated from Tremper the previous year, works at The Spot drive-in on 75th Street and 22nd Avenue
#3 - father of #1, narcissistic, assembly line worker at AMC for 23 years, looking forward to a promotion soon
#4 - classmate and neighbor of #1, already accepted to Ripon College, introduces #1 to Masumi, has most potential for success among the major characters
#2 - friend of #1, graduated from Tremper the previous year, works at The Spot drive-in on 75th Street and 22nd Avenue
#3 - father of #1, narcissistic, assembly line worker at AMC for 23 years, looking forward to a promotion soon
#4 - classmate and neighbor of #1, already accepted to Ripon College, introduces #1 to Masumi, has most potential for success among the major characters
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